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On Sept, 2007, I had about ten thousand dollars of savings. At that time, my father was earning a good profit from investing through a stock company. I decided to invest my money as well. On top of the profit, I wanted to know about stocks and how the profit was generated. I went to “Mirae-Asset Stock Company” which was well known as a profit bringer in Korea. Due to a financial advisor’s recommendation, I invested in stock goods called “China Solomon Securities Investment” for 3,000 and “Asia P